tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post2111542559698718773..comments2023-05-23T08:20:52.950-07:00Comments on chimes of a forgotten melody: Haiku HindsightsAnand S Unnihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-63610499506261318322014-06-21T23:17:11.490-07:002014-06-21T23:17:11.490-07:00"Chimes of a Forgotten Melody" has been ..."Chimes of a Forgotten Melody" has been included in the A Sunday Drive for this week. Be assured that we hope this helps to point even more new visitors in your direction.<br /><br />http://asthecrackerheadcrumbles.blogspot.com/2014/06/a-sunday-drive_22.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349087080262856079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-49109504544139000452014-06-09T11:52:35.865-07:002014-06-09T11:52:35.865-07:00I tried Haiku once but didn't really enjoy wri...I tried Haiku once but didn't really enjoy writing them. Hope you had a better experience . . . Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-70859959174443007832014-06-08T15:35:30.458-07:002014-06-08T15:35:30.458-07:00Schrodinger's Cat . . . .Schrodinger's Cat . . . .Stormcat Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16684250269137492366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-76432998621171335492014-06-08T14:45:07.348-07:002014-06-08T14:45:07.348-07:00I love the first set. "A stained window to v...I love the first set. "A stained window to view the world..." that's an imperfect view then, stained by one's insights and judgments.Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-5945953540287185182014-06-08T11:26:47.108-07:002014-06-08T11:26:47.108-07:00Beautiful haiku. I especially resonate with "...Beautiful haiku. I especially resonate with "repetitive fights with a melancholy heart". Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-29184670653417563602014-06-08T09:15:00.599-07:002014-06-08T09:15:00.599-07:00A very good set of poems. I like them and can rela...A very good set of poems. I like them and can relate to the feeling evoked.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-64365410910942414692014-06-08T06:34:46.064-07:002014-06-08T06:34:46.064-07:00Hmm. Haiku beautifully conceived and overall, the...Hmm. Haiku beautifully conceived and overall, the content matches the form! If our eyes are the stained glass of our genes and environment: "Imperfect with Acumen" we have a perfectly justified separation from each other. Poets are forever trying to expose this paradox and to build bridges across it, but still but still, how much more inward can we grow without dissolving the web of existence? Some say, when humans leave that web it will thrive. I think we must patch it.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-48982077709869351782014-06-08T05:14:34.763-07:002014-06-08T05:14:34.763-07:00You certainly did well, Anand. I like the second a...You certainly did well, Anand. I like the second and third haiku best. The idea that the destined victor is the heart and how you portray the poet.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-66973440677266379132014-06-08T04:43:25.211-07:002014-06-08T04:43:25.211-07:00ha. nice...none of us have the perfect view on lif...ha. nice...none of us have the perfect view on life...and our lenses do cloud us to other perspectives unless we are intentional about seeking them...<br />all our explanations fall short.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-80677052561485832912014-06-08T02:49:30.343-07:002014-06-08T02:49:30.343-07:00I think number 2 carries the day for me.I think number 2 carries the day for me.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-16519559109835148952014-06-03T22:09:39.618-07:002014-06-03T22:09:39.618-07:00All are very nice and I particularly like the cycl...All are very nice and I particularly like the cycle of science. Good job.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-12679071989557709742014-06-03T07:07:05.135-07:002014-06-03T07:07:05.135-07:00Nice. My favorite is the third one. I like the i...Nice. My favorite is the third one. I like the image of a poet burning thoughts to words!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com