tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post6267866774949668885..comments2023-05-23T08:20:52.950-07:00Comments on chimes of a forgotten melody: A Lost LoveAnand S Unnihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-43114737296765020302013-12-07T22:27:58.294-08:002013-12-07T22:27:58.294-08:00nice
nice<br />vishnu781https://www.blogger.com/profile/14317993514202815017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-21320637891933140222013-09-13T09:31:34.460-07:002013-09-13T09:31:34.460-07:00Thank you Sherin sir. This comment means a lot to ...Thank you Sherin sir. This comment means a lot to me. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-896588618110059432013-09-12T22:52:39.449-07:002013-09-12T22:52:39.449-07:00i dont have much words to tell how is this one onl...i dont have much words to tell how is this one only thing i want to tell u is ..ur not an ordinary student foe me... i like u a lot nd wishes god makes u to make this kind a lot..more in ur feature...sherin thampihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14505434031325895521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-65855582600031530962013-05-19T13:49:20.733-07:002013-05-19T13:49:20.733-07:00Thanks Bon. :)Thanks Bon. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-51490770982512613192013-05-19T13:49:06.593-07:002013-05-19T13:49:06.593-07:00Thanks a lot Sherry. Glad you picked it up. :)Thanks a lot Sherry. Glad you picked it up. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-180249455541535602013-05-19T13:48:06.559-07:002013-05-19T13:48:06.559-07:00Thank you. I am glad that everything I wanted to t...Thank you. I am glad that everything I wanted to throw out with the poem was gracefully caught. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-63174026268144398532013-05-19T13:46:53.555-07:002013-05-19T13:46:53.555-07:00Thanks a lot Laura. Both for the comment and for j...Thanks a lot Laura. Both for the comment and for joining the blog.Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-29941128325669276212013-05-19T13:46:21.857-07:002013-05-19T13:46:21.857-07:00Thanks a lot Lisa. :)Thanks a lot Lisa. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-88445743503555885812013-05-19T13:45:57.752-07:002013-05-19T13:45:57.752-07:00Thanks a ton Mary for taking the time for reading ...Thanks a ton Mary for taking the time for reading it carefully and posting your views. It is true, that is how I intended the ending to be. But I do believe the choice of interpretation rests with each reader. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-37114492121266251622013-05-19T13:42:17.521-07:002013-05-19T13:42:17.521-07:00Thanks a lot Brian. Ad Im sorry if it led you to s...Thanks a lot Brian. Ad Im sorry if it led you to sad memories. TC anyway. God be with you.Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-54158507301747149722013-05-19T12:30:33.471-07:002013-05-19T12:30:33.471-07:00/much like a blanched pigeon freshly caged/ Wow - .../much like a blanched pigeon freshly caged/ Wow - great line.parentforward.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02363442700397713616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-58533489043027125472013-05-19T10:52:29.701-07:002013-05-19T10:52:29.701-07:00I interpreted your poem the same way Mary did. A s...I interpreted your poem the same way Mary did. A strong write. One feels the slipping in and out of consciousness, and the other-worldly feelings of the person in the bed.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-23257990938547921582013-05-19T08:50:58.155-07:002013-05-19T08:50:58.155-07:00Intense, heart-breaking, and gorgeously written yo...Intense, heart-breaking, and gorgeously written your choice of language and the flow really enhances the sense of a drug-induced sort of haze (how I imagined it at least)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-29149558708452194842013-05-19T06:10:57.980-07:002013-05-19T06:10:57.980-07:00A very painful poem, yet moving and so real.A very painful poem, yet moving and so real.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-33817601800334982842013-05-19T05:37:15.281-07:002013-05-19T05:37:15.281-07:00terrifying, full of pain and such tender love too....terrifying, full of pain and such tender love too. Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-80132539739516747162013-05-19T05:07:03.556-07:002013-05-19T05:07:03.556-07:00What a powerful poem this is.What a powerful poem this is.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-80791505573391838052013-05-19T05:03:58.935-07:002013-05-19T05:03:58.935-07:00Ah, I read this a few times. My thought is that a...Ah, I read this a few times. My thought is that at the end of the poem the narrator died (monitor went blank) and joined his loved one who was reaching out to him from the 'light' (in the tunnel it is said people often see when they die). A strong poem. I was swept along in its telling, didn't really know on first reading what I believed about the reality....but in the end I concluded both died but joined one another on the other side!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-10210613909307856922013-05-19T04:15:16.396-07:002013-05-19T04:15:16.396-07:00wow...what a tale...told in such a way i am right ...wow...what a tale...told in such a way i am right there as well...took me back to the death of my mother in law...so sad...i am glad though your narrator has already found her in the after...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-1518940488779085352013-05-19T03:53:50.606-07:002013-05-19T03:53:50.606-07:00Im sorry about your Dad. Hope everything becomes O...Im sorry about your Dad. Hope everything becomes OK.Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-25166683294977858322013-05-19T03:52:53.168-07:002013-05-19T03:52:53.168-07:00As a reader I have given options to think of eithe...As a reader I have given options to think of either. You could choose what you want out of the poem. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-30685623520890089142013-05-19T03:51:38.020-07:002013-05-19T03:51:38.020-07:00Thanks a lot Nataša for looking onto my poem and d...Thanks a lot Nataša for looking onto my poem and dropping your comments. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-38653535744302231062013-05-19T03:28:46.064-07:002013-05-19T03:28:46.064-07:00a bit scary - my dad's in the world of morphin...a bit scary - my dad's in the world of morphine and monitors at the moment, but I sure like your styleBrother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-33593447049410883172013-05-19T01:12:50.355-07:002013-05-19T01:12:50.355-07:00It is hard to guess for me.....so nicely written, ...It is hard to guess for me.....so nicely written, sometimes it seems like a reality, sometimes like a dream and sometimes like a vision.....Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-89281169915688684922013-05-19T00:47:54.133-07:002013-05-19T00:47:54.133-07:00I like how 4th and 5th verse contradict themselves...I like how 4th and 5th verse contradict themselves. I've always loved human consciousness and how emotional trauma and drugs affect it, to the point we're not sure which of the realities we're experiencing is true. Thus said, I like this poem and the way it flows.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1298902981081945410.post-35272017122482414012013-05-06T02:53:25.782-07:002013-05-06T02:53:25.782-07:00The wrath of love is witnessed remarkably when sep...The wrath of love is witnessed remarkably when separation strikes in between. What stands next is just an existence that lacks life.<br /><br />The poem finds itself with a narrator who lost his beloved in a car crash that he himself caused.<br /><br />But is it all? Do the car crash exist in reality or in his sub conscious mind? Find out. Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.com